Tag: toikupu

colour poem

Every Friday we do poetry so this Friday we did a poem about a colour poem. So I chose orange my poem was. ( Orange tastes like a juicy and sweet   mango

it looks as dark and beautiful as a sunset it feels like a soft orange petal.It smells like sweet sticky juice it sounds like 1 trillion orange fruits falling down or leaving the autumn.)

So I found it challenging to find ideas and I found it kind of easy to

find the colour.and the writing.

do you know what a smelly is ?

what should I work on ?

nouns adjectives and verbs

every Friday we do poetry with our teacher Miss Buckley which is our Re teacher and sometimes teaches us when our teacher we always have miss hart is away with reading with other people at school or we have another teacher and miss Buckley has told us what a diamante poem a diamante poem is a noun a adjective or a verb a noun is a name of something and a adjective is a describing word and a verb is a doing word so my diamante poem was about autumn and here is my work what is a diamante poem on a autumn leaf .

and what do you think I should ad ?

and what should I do better at ?